Advert

This is a picture of my magazine advert, I created this part of the magazine and was unsure how to improve it from here on  so asked a focus group.

Likes :

• The Background, with the trees and wooded scene

Dislikes

• The font used, too plain and boring,
• Needs more text on it, for example another slogan i.e. Best album
• Needs another picture or logo or something to liven it up a bit.