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I was told that there were too many colours going on so should get rid of the vibrant colours and then put in instead different text, and rather than talk about the brit award talk about the album release date. Also I was told to make it easier to read and was advised to thicken the outline of the words. This also includes the barcode like the digipak for the same effect. Asking my focus group they said that the colour scheme stayed constant and looked really effective now with the red outline to the text being bolder, making much more legible. I was also told that the idea of having a i phone scanner barcode was a really good idea and would help to promote the artist even more.